Feedback to Learner6

Feedback to Learner6/22/18 1:04 PM

You have provided a good first essay attempt, and a solid foundation, which is well organized and presented, but I would like to see a revision of this first paper in order to demonstrate full mastery of the prompt. 

Most importantly, your claims need more support with specific evidence from our assigned content. You should not need to go outside the assigned readings and course materials to answer the prompt. The formatting of the paper needs revisions in order to be in keeping with MLA formatting. Review the Writing Resources Module for assistance with proper formatting and in text citations.

Essay Topic: was KV62 intended for King TUT?