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How to Write Personal Statement (Admission Essay)

A personal statement can be required for either academic or other purposes such as job application. Writing a personal statement gives one an opportunity to sell himself/herself in the application process. But before writing a personal statement, one need to differentiate between general personal statements and specific personal statements. General (comprehensive) personal statements allow one maximum freedom regarding what one writes. Those are the kind of personal statements usually prepared for standard law school or medical application forms. Specific personal statements require one to respond to specific questions.  Those type of personal statements is often required for those applying for graduate or business schools. When one is writing such statements, one must be careful to respond only to the specific questions asked in the application form. Sometimes, business schools require applicants to submit multiple essays.

Irrespective of the nature of the personal statement, there are rules that must be followed.

Tell a story: The essay should not be boring to the admission panel committee. To write an interesting personal statement, a student should show or demonstrate concrete experience. Distinguishing oneself using the story would make one memorable.

Find angle: Writing a personal statement which looks like you are reading from the same script with anyone else might not interest the committee. One ought to find a “hook” or an angle.

Carry out some research: A school might with to know why you are applying to instead of other schools. One should, therefore, do some research on what makes the school his/her preferred choice.

Present a well-written statement: Successful applicants are not only those who write well but also those who do it correctly. Before submitting your statement, it pays to proofread it several times. One can ask someone to peruse through it before submitting. Apart from adhering to stated word limits, one should also express oneself clearly as well as concisely.

Avoid some subjects: When writing a personal statement, it is important to know what should be included and what should be avoided. For example, certain experiences gained in high school might not be relevant and so to controversial topics such as politics, racism, and politics.

Focus on your introduction: an Introductory paragraph is the most important because it is a “door” to your essay. One would be interested in continuing depending on the introduction part of the statement. It should grab the reader’s attention because it becomes the framework for the remaining part of the statement.

Respond to questions asked: If one is applying to more than one school, one may find that there are some similarities in some sections. However, one should not be tempted to employ the same personal statement for all applications even when certain sections of the application are similar.

Narrate what you know: besides the requirement for details such as field/subject experience and knowledge in the middle part of the essay, some people do graduate without grasping the finer details of their area of specialization. One ought to write specific content about the field they hope to enter by using experience and knowledge gained in the past field of study. A professional language ought to be used throughout. Some of the important knowledge and experience worth referring include research, books read, classes, internship, conversations with professionals, and seminars attended in the past.

Avoid common clichés: Certain statements have been repeated several times in the past or many submitted personal statements. They are tiring statements and must be avoided at all costs. For example, an applicant hoping to join a medical school might suggest that one reason for applying to join the school is because he/she is good in sciences and math and has a passion for helping people with medical problems.

Pre-modern Empires and Modern Empires

What was the determining characteristic of pre-modern empires? By “determining characteristic” I mean the trait that to your mind all empires shared. Was it trade and exchange? What it technological innovation? Was it military prowess? How did this characteristic shape the way empires grew and maintained themselves? Select three from among the various empires discussed in Smith, et al, chapters 14-15, and then talk first about their history and development and then second about how they expanded and/or maintained themselves over the centuries. Essays should be at least 1,000 words in length. Essays should have at least four citations from the text. Essays will be graded on the logic and coherence of the argument, their utilization of the text, and on the command they display of the assigned readings and video documentaries.

Book

Bonnie Smith, et al, World in the Making: A Global History, volume 2: since 1300

Psychological disorders

If you had to give yourself a psychological disorder, what would it be? Describe the disorder and its criteria and explain why you may have it. (give examples of your behavior)