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Article Critique Instructions (60 points possible)
Article Critique Instructions (60 points possible)
Ryan J. Winter
Florida International University
Purpose of The Article Critique Paper
1). Psychological Purpose
This paper serves several purposes, the first of which is helping you gain insight into research papers in psychology. As this may be your first time reading and writing papers in psychology, one goal of Paper I is to give you insight into what goes into such papers. This article critique paper will help you learn about the various sections of an empirical research report by reading at least one peer-reviewed articles (articles that have a Title Page, Abstract*, Literature Review, Methods Section, Results Section, and References Page—I have already selected some articles for you to critique, so make sure you only critique one in the folder provided on Canvas) This paper will also give you some insights into how the results sections are written in APA formatted research articles. Pay close attention to those sections, as throughout this course you’ll be writing up some results of your own!
In this relatively short paper, you will read one of five articles posted on Canvas and summarize what the authors did and what they found. The first part of the paper should focus on summarizing the design the authors used for their project. That is, you will identify the independent and dependent variables, talk about how the authors carried out their study, and then summarize the results (you don’t need to fully understand the statistics in the results, but try to get a sense of what the authors did in their analyses). In the second part of the paper, you will critique the article for its methodological strengths and weaknesses. Finally, in part three, you will provide your references for the Article Critique Paper in APA format.
2). APA Formatting Purpose
The second purpose of the Article Critique paper is to teach you proper American Psychological Association (APA) formatting. In the instructions below, I tell you how to format your paper using APA style. There are a lot of very specific requirements in APA papers, so pay attention to the instructions below as well as the APA style powerpoint on Canvas. We are using the 7th edition of the APA style manual.
3). Writing Purpose
Finally, this paper is intended to help you grow as a writer. Few psychology classes give you the chance to write papers and receive feedback on your work. This class will! We will give you feedback on this paper in terms of content, spelling, and grammar.
Article Critique Paper (60 points possible)
Each student is required to write an article critique paper based on one of the research articles present on Canvas only those articles listed on Canvas can be critiqued – if you critique a different article, it will not be graded). If you are unclear about any of this information, please ask.
What is an article critique paper?
An article critique is a written communication that conveys your understanding of a research article and how it relates to the conceptual issues of interest to this course.
This article critique paper will include 5 things:
Title page: 1 page- 4 points
Use APA style to present the appropriate information:
A Running head must be included and formatted APA style
The running head is a short title of your creation (no more than 50 characters) that is in ALL CAPS. This running head is left-justified (flush left on the page). Look at the first page of these instructions, and you will see how to set up your running head.
There must be a page number on the title page that is right justified. It is in the header on the title page and all subsequent pages.
Your paper title appears on the title page. This is usually 12 words or less, and the first letter of each word is capitalized. It should be descriptive of the paper (For this paper, you should use the title of the article you are critiquing. The paper title can be the same title as in the Running head or it can differ – your choice). The title should be bolded.
Your name will appear on the title page, include 2 double spaced lines between the title and your name (see the title page here). Your name and institutional affiliation (the name of your university) should not be bold.
Your institution will appear on the title page as well
For all papers, make sure to double-space EVERYTHING and use Times New Roman font. This includes everything from the title page through the references.
This is standard APA format. ALL of your future papers will include a similar title page
Summary of the Article: 1 ½ page minimum, 3 pages maximum – 14 points
An article critique should briefly summarize, in your own words, the article research question and how it was addressed in the article. Below are some things to include in your summary.
The summary itself will include the following:
Type of study (Was it experimental or correlational? How do you know?)
Variables (What were the independent and dependent variables? How did they manipulate the IV? How did they operationally define the DV? Be specific with these. Define the terms independent and dependent variable and make sure to identify how they are operationally defined in the article)
Method (What did the participants do in the study? How was it set up? Was there a random sample of participants? Was there random assignment to groups?). How was data collected (online, in person, in a laboratory?).
Summary of findings (What were their findings?)
Critique of the study: 1 ½ pages minimum – 3 pages maximum – 16 points
This portion of the article critique assignment focuses on your own thoughts about the content of the article (i.e. your own ideas in your own words). For this section, please use the word “Critique” below the last sentence in your summary, and have the word “Critique” flush left.
This section is a bit harder, but there are a number of ways to demonstrate critical thinking in your writing. Address at least four of the following elements. You can address more than four, but four is the minimum.
1). In your opinion, are there any confounding variables in the study (these could be extraneous variables or nuisance variables)? If so, explain what the confound is and specifically how it is impacting the results of the study. A sufficient explanation of this will include at least one paragraph of writing.
2). Is the sample used in the study an appropriate sample? Is the sample representative of the population? Could the study be replicated if it were done again? Why or why not?
3). Did they measure the dependent variable in a way that is valid? Be sure to explain what validity is, and why you believe the dependent variable was or was not measured in a way that was valid.
4). Did the study authors correctly interpret their findings, or are there any alternative interpretations you can think of?
5). Did the authors of the study employ appropriate ethical safeguards?
6). Briefly describe a follow-up study you might design that builds on the findings of the study you read how the research presented in the article relates to research, articles or material covered in other sections of the course
7). Describe whether you feel the results presented in the article are weaker or stronger than the authors claim (and why); or discuss alternative interpretations of the results (i.e. something not mentioned by the authors) and/or what research might provide a test between the proposed and alternate interpretations
8). Mention additional implications of the findings not mentioned in the article (either theoretical or practical/applied)
9). Identify specific problems in the theory, discussion or empirical research presented in the article and how these problems could be corrected. If the problems you discuss are methodological in nature, then they must be issues that are substantial enough to affect the interpretations of the findings or arguments presented in the article. Furthermore, for methodological problems, you must justify not only why something is problematic but also how it could be resolved and why your proposed solution would be preferable.
10). Describe how/why the method used in the article is either better or worse for addressing a particular issue than other methods
Brief summary of the article: One or Two paragraphs-6 points
Write the words “Brief Summary”, and then begin the brief summary below this
In ONE or TWO paragraphs maximum, summarize the article again, but this time I want it to be very short. In other words, take all of the information that you talked about in the summary portion of this assignment and write it again, but this time in only a few sentences.
The reason for this section is that I want to make sure you can understand the whole study but that you can also write about it in a shorter paragraph that still emphasizes the main points of the article. Pretend that you are writing your own literature review for a research study, and you need to get the gist of an article that you read that helps support your own research across to your reader. Make sure to cite the original study (the article you are critiquing).
References – 1 page-4 points
Provide the reference for this article in proper APA format (see the book Chapter 14 for appropriate referencing guidelines or the Chapter 14 powerpoint).
If you cited other sources during either your critique or summary, reference them as well (though you do not need to cite other sources in this assignment – this is merely optional IF you happen to bring in other sources). Formatting counts here, so make sure to italicize where appropriate and watch which words you are capitalizing!
Grammar and Writing Quality-6 points
Few psychology courses are as writing intensive as Research Methods (especially Research Methods Two next semester!). As such, I want to make sure that you develop writing skills early. This is something that needs special attention, so make sure to proofread your papers carefully.
Avoid run-on sentences, sentence fragments, spelling errors, and grammar errors. Writing quality will become more important in future papers, but this is where you should start to hone your writing skills.
We will give you feedback on your papers, but I recommend seeking some help from the FIU writing center to make sure your paper is clear, precise, and covers all needed material. I also recommend asking a few of your group members to read over your paper and make suggestions. You can do the same for them!
If your paper lacks originality and contains too much overlap with the paper you are summarizing (i.e. you do not paraphrase appropriately or cite your sources properly), you will lose some or all of the points from writing quality, depending on the extent of the overlap with the paper. For example, if sentences contain only one or two words changed from a sentence in the original paper, you will lose points from writing quality.
Please note that you do not need to refer to any other sources other than the article on which you have chosen to write your paper. However, you are welcome to refer to additional sources if you choose.
Self-Rating Rubric (10 points). On canvas, you will find a self-rating rubric. This rubric contains a summary of all the points available to you in this paper. You must submit your ratings for your own paper, using this rubric (essentially, you’ll grade your own paper before you hand it in). You will upload your completed rubric to the “article critique rubric” assignment on Canvas.
Please put effort into your ratings. Do not simply give yourself a 50/50. Really reflect on the quality of your paper and whether you meet all the criteria listed.
If it is clear that you have not reflected sufficiently on your paper (e.g., you give a rating of 2/2 for something that is not included in your paper), you will lose points.
This does not mean that you are guaranteed whatever grade you give to yourself. Instead, this will help you to 1) make sure that you have included everything you need to include, and 2) help you to reflect on your own writing.
In fact, we will use this very same rubric when we grade your paper, so you should know exactly what to expect for your grade!
Other guidelines for the article critique papers
1). Pay attention to the page length requirements – 1 page for the title page, 1.5 pages to 3 pages for the summary, 1.5 pages to 3 pages for the critique, one or two paragraphs for the brief summary, and 1 page for the references page. If you are under the minimum, we will deduct points. If you go over the maximum, we are a little more flexible (you can go over by half page or so), but we want you to try to keep it to the maximum page.
2). Page size is 8 1/2 X 11” with all 4 margins set one inch on all sides. You must use 12-point Times New Roman font.
3). As a general rule, ALL paragraphs and sentences are double spaced in APA papers. It even includes the references, so make sure to double space EVERYTHING
4). When summarizing the article in your own words, you need not continually cite the article throughout the rest of your critique. Nonetheless, you should follow proper referencing procedures, which means that:
If you are inserting a direct quote from any source, it must be enclosed in quotations and followed by a parenthetical reference to the source. “Let’s say I am directly quoting this current sentence and the next. I would then cite it with the author name, date of publication, and the page number for the direct quote” (Winter, 2013, p . 4).
Note: We will deduct points if you quote more than once per page, so keep quotes to a minimum. Paraphrase instead, but make sure you still give the original author credit for the material by citing him or using the author’s name (“In this article, Smith noted that …” or “In this article, the authors noted that…”)
If you choose to reference any source other than your chosen article, it must be listed in a reference list.
5). Proofread everything you write. I actually recommend reading some sentences aloud to see if they flow well, or getting family or friends to read your work. Writing quality will become more important in future papers, so you should start working on that now!
If you have any questions about the articles, your ideas, or your writing, please ask. Although we won’t be able to review entire drafts of papers before they are handed in, we are very willing to discuss problems, concerns or issues that you might have.
Homeland security is a term that is used by the Americans.
Homeland security
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Institutional affiliation
Abstract
Homeland security is a term that is used by the Americans. It refers to “the general effort by the country to ensure that there is enough security and that the homeland is very safe, protected, and robust against any intruders of terrorism and other negative dangers”. Where the countries welfares, aspirations, and others means of life can succeed to archive a the general common struggle to offer prevention against attacks within the United States, reduce the rate of liability of the U.S. to terrorism, and to ensure that there is minimization of the zero damage of properties and more lives from attacks that do occur (MacManus, S. A. (2006). Homeland security cannot take measure against terrorist incidents. Terrorism is a significant danger encountered by many makes the society feel unsafe. Within the United States, Approach gave to all risks usually exists due to homeland security endeavors. In this discussion, it outrages a sense in that homeland security encounters both the natural disasters and man-made human-made activities. Therefore, the territory that homeland security operates must have to provide the plethora of circumstances and scenarios, that works within the specific range of areas of from natural disasters for instance., Hurricane to actions of terrorism.
The term Homeland security came into place as a results of the enactment of the Act of 2002 and reformation of various department of the united states civil agencies of the government. that were effective as from first march 2003 to put the structural formation of the United States Department of Homeland security after 11 different various forms of the attack that occurred in September hence this can be used as reference point for the engagements of the department.
Currently, Homeland defense forces offer thorough military protection for the United States government and the citizens at large and also to guide the countries territory, authority, essential buildings and critical infrastructure against an attack from the enemy and outward threats and antagonism.
According to the current situation in the world, this research is conducted to enhance understanding of the importance of the study of Homeland Security and Emergency Management and how it is imperative and critical in our lives today. It helps the citizens with the knowledge of “know how” and how they can protect, conduct and report any suspicious reports (Bush, G. W. (2003). The Division of Homeland Security and Emergency Management helps citizens prevent, prepare for, respond to and recover from disasters and works to keep Minnesota secure from acts of terrorism.
The study offers essential solutions on how a person can contribute respond for protection from both online activities, individualism source of protection, and to have any suspicion threats reported if they encounter one. Homeland security and Emergency Management is so simple and has provided knowledge on how to:
Remain aware of your surroundings;
Refrain from oversharing personal information; and
Say something if you see something.
Some more information has provided regarding how the study of Homeland Security and Emergency Management help us to report suspicious activity and protect the community from any attack is stated below:
Group Preparedness Tools: Businesses are encouraged to subordinate, plan, prepare, and report. Putting this these four stages before any experience or assault can enable better to get ready administrations and their legislatures to proactively consider the part they play in the wellbeing and security of their organizations and groups.
The Contact Us area of the FBI’s site gives nitty-gritty contact data, for example, significant telephone numbers and the addresses of the FBI’s neighborhood and worldwide workplaces. You can likewise present a tip on the web.
Reference
Bush, G. W. (2003). Homeland security presidential directive 5. National Security Presidential Directives.
Caruson, K., & MacManus, S. A. (2006). Mandates and management challenges in the trenches: An intergovernmental perspective on homeland security. Public Administration Review, 66(4), 522-536.
Home-Delivered Meals Program
Home-Delivered Meals Program
Mission/Purpose of the ProgramThis is a nutritional program for the aged people started in 1965 under the OAA (Older Americans Act). It is run in different states by different organizations. In Los Angeles for instance it started in 1988 and it was initiated by Los Angeles Department of Aging. It is also known by another name as “Meals on Wheels”. The latter is a popular name in the whole country for provision of meals delivered at home to the older people. The name originated from World War II in Britain where a volunteer woman used to deliver snacks to servicemen while on duty and the soldiers nicknamed it as the “meals on Wheels”. This name has been adopted by many cities as well as area agencies for the aging and also by nonprofit organizations and churches that provides nutritional services.
As previously mentioned this program was developed through the OAA. According to NCPC, n.d), administration on aging gave all state agencies $719 million for instance in 2005 to run these nutrition programs. Therefore, a lot of federal grant to the state goes to funding the meal programs. The meal program is considered to be one of the largest elements of the aging network. The program is run through various area agencies. For instance, LADOA (Los Angeles Department of Aging) is the organization responsible for the program in Los Angeles in California. It is one of the 33 AAAs (Area Agencies on Aging) that are found in California. These agencies were developed in 1963 through a constitutional act known as Older American Act of 1963. These agencies were developed to offer assistance to the older people and their caregivers, so that they could help to make their lives worth living. Accordingly, LADOA was developed in 1973 to act as the vessel for delivering this quality life (LADOA, n.d).
In 1965, a law known as Older American Act, of Title VII (the nutrition program) was passed. This law gave room for provision of meals to senior citizens in locations where they gather together. In 1977, the Congress gave more powers to this act through Title III enabling provision of home-delivered meals. According to Frongilio et al (1987), demand for nutritional services as anticipated then has continued to rise. They give an estimated figure of 175,000 as the number of home-delivered meals served on a daily basis through the act then. Yet, in spite of this expansion only a sizeable number of the total number of older people entitled to get these meals are able to do so. They further points out that at the time of writing their work the Administration on Aging had nationally approximated that about half of all the older people entitled to receive the program were being reached. The LADOA program, which was established at the same time this article was written can be said to have come about in order to address this gap in delivering of government program.
The passing of the Older American Act in 1965 was a very important step forward. That decade from 1960 to 70 was of significant value to America. There was a lot of social change and unrest. It was a period of extending civil rights to millions of Americans. At the time various organizations lobbied the congress to recognize certain rights of American older people. This culminated in the passage of the Act. The purpose of the Act was among others to ensure older people remain at home and guarantee their independence. This was seen as an important move that would keep cost of provision of elderly care institutions low. Lee et al (2008) agree with the argument that this kind of program delay institutionalization and thus lower the health care expenditure on elderly Americans.
The meals on the wheels are a countywide program that is run in various States by different agencies and organizations. In Los Angeles Meals for instance it operates throughout various parts of the city. The intention is to enhance the quality of life, health, independence and dignity of older population in the city. The agency hopes to attain this by running community located senior programs, which are coordinated, comprehensive, and accessible and also champion for the older citizens needs (LADOA, n.d)
The OAA is meant to benefit population above 60 years (NCPC, nd). It goes without saying then that the meal on the wheel goes to benefit this particular segment of the population. Most of the people receiving this type of meal through the program are the elderly and especially women with chronic illness and living alone. Their inability to walk and lack of transportation makes this group of people unable to move outside their homes. Volunteers thus deliver to their residences a hot meal at noon every five days in a week.
Theory/Model the Program is Based UponThe program is based on nutritional values. Scientist provides evidence that if elders can get good nutrition they can stay healthy and live independently within their communities. The OAA envisioned improved nutrient intake by serving elders with five or more meals in a week or more. Under a congregate meal plan the meals are supposed to be served in various types of settings including faith-based and community facilities, senior centers, and adult day care facilities. Within these facilities the older people get an opportunity to interact with other people in a social environment and develop new friends. They may get various types of nutritional related services like nutrition screening, education, assessment, and counseling. They also get health promotion, health screening, as well as other services. This is to improve their well-being and health. Similar to the congregate meals described above Home Delivered Meals (HDM) also enables adults to improve their nutritional intake. The meals provided in this kind of program may be hot, frozen, cold, dried, supplemental or canned food. Apart from that, it can involve provision of the three common meals in a day for a period of 5 days in a week with exceptional delivery during the weekend (NRCNPAA, 2005).
Activities of the ProgramUnder the home delivered meals program LADOA provides meals to elderly people living within their homes. This group of people especially those living on their own tend to miss the opportunity to consume certain types of nutrition’s. In addition, due to certain conditions like illness, loneliness, and depression these elderly people tend to lose their appetite and as a result do not eat properly. Besides, they sometime lack means of transport to go and do some shopping or even they lack the mood to take time and prepare their meals at home (LADOA, 2004). Some of them also spend most of their time at home because they are very weak. As a result, of these numerous challenges this group of people may develop certain illness because of not eating the right type of nutrition’s. Volunteers visit these old people every day at noon to bring them a hot meal. This meal provides them with vital nutrients that otherwise they would have missed. Beside this meal, they get a rare opportunity to interact with other people. This is an opportunity that many people cherish besides the hot meal. These meals are delivered to the elderly people’s home between 11 am and noon every five days within a week (NCPC, n.d). These meals are based on menus prepared by nutritionists to ensure that the elderly consume at least a third of nutritional intake that is recommended in a day. In case, the person delivering the meal finds the resident absent they bring these meals back to the kitchen.
Who Provides themThe services mentioned above are provided by a group of volunteers and through community donations. Besides, there is also a national association that coordinates all the efforts under the program of meals on the wheel and offer training support to over 900 such programs across the country (NCPC, n.d). The spirit of volunteerism and public contributions are major pillars that have supported this program of the meals on wheels. The fo0od provided is prepared by catering companies or in community kitchen. Apart from cost of buying food, workers who prepare the food in the kitchen, transportation, and administrators the other services for the program are provided by volunteers. Volunteers for the program come from different corners. Some of them are elderly people in the community with the desire to serve others or just teenagers who like to serve the elderly. However, in most of the time they come from programs sponsored by employers for volunteers. Many companies recognize the need to for this compassionate service and they allocate time for their employees to dedicate their time as volunteers. Besides, these programs also receive donations from companies especially to take care of transportation, administration, and meal preparation.
Besides, money used in the program comes from a variety of sources. Some come from the local government, and the OOA also provides another avenue to acquire some grant. There is also a good chunk of the fund that comes from community donations.
Program OutcomesThere has been a variety of positive outcomes with regard to the implementation of this program. It has been a solace for many elderly people. First because it provides much needed nutrition to a group of people that otherwise would have suffered hunger and deprivation. According to Ziliak & Gundersen (2009), some 5.7% of elderly people, a ratio that makes 2.7 million people was at risk of suffering from hunger. This is based on survey conducted on CPS (Current Population Survey) report of between 2001 and 2007 on more than 50, 000 households in US for people aged above 60 years. They further states that this was an increase in the number of seniors at risk of food insecurity. Again, that mostly affected group is the poor and seniors residing in some states such as Mississippi, South Carolina among others. Besides, NRCNPAA (2005) notes that the program is beneficial considering that most of the adults discharged from hospitals deserve care plans that provides these kinds of meals as well as various nutrition services. Therefore, we can correctly argue that the program has been a success by providing much needed nutrition at the home level to this vulnerable population.
The program in so doing has also been instrumental in reducing health care costs. Provision of a hot meal per day in every five day within a week has enabled to prolong the lives of these people and to keep them away from institutions. The money that would otherwise go to taking care of a soaring population of sick elderly can now go to other uses. Besides, the plan has also helped to put a smile on these people. These elderly in the absence of the home delivered meals live a quiet and lonely live. They are completely cut off from the social life. The volunteer delivering these meals get an opportunity to interact with them and make them smile. CVAA website notes that the visit by the volunteer is also crucial just like the meal itself. This is because on top of the meal they bring greetings and a friendly smile to the elderly to ensure they are safe and doing well.
In spite of the positive outcomes the program has also had some challenges. First is due to funding. Although many area agencies involved in the program are able to raise funds from the community. They still depend on the federal grants. Cut off of aids from the government has derailed the success of this program in some parts. In affected areas they have had to contemplate a slash of the number of meals served (Covert, 2013). To address this challenge there is need to rethink about the program funding. It may be time to think of funding the program completely from well wishers and corporations social responsibilities plans. There has also been the challenge of targeting. The OAA broadly describes the target population as involving elderly above 60 years. However, as we have noted some people especially low income earners and certain races tend to have more pressing needs. As a result there is need to pay attention to targeting in order to make the program more effective in the future.
References
City of Los Angeles Department of Aging (LADOA). (2004). Program and Service Provider Directory. Retrieved on 10th May 2013 from: http://aging.lacity.org/pdf/brochures/ProgramandServiceDirectory.pdf
Coty of Los Angeles Department of Aging (LADOA). (n.d). Program & Services. Retrieved on 10th May 2013 from: http://aging.lacity.org/publications/
Covert, B. (2013). “Budget Cuts Devastate Meals on Wheels: Enrollment Slashed, Services Cancelled”. Think progress. Retrieved on 10th may 2013 from: http://thinkprogress.org/economy/2013/05/01/1946271/budget-cuts-meals-on-wheels/?mobile=nc
CVAA. (n.d). Meals on Wheels Nourishes, Comfort, Befriends. Retrieved on 10th may 2013 from: http://www.cvaa.org/meals-on-wheels.html.
Frongilio, E. A., Williamson, D. F., Roe, D. A., and Scholes, J. E. (1987). Continuance of Elderly on Home-Delivered meals programs. American Journal of Public Health, Vol. 77(9): 1176-1179.
Lee, J., Frongillo, E.A., Keating M.A, Deutsch, L. H., & Frongillo, D. E. (2008). Targeting of Home-Delivered meals Programs to Older Adults in the United States. Journal of Nutrition for the Elderly, Vol.27(3-4): 405-415.
NCPC-(n.d). National Care Planning Council. Community Aging Services and Senior Centers. Retrieved on 10th May 2013 from: http://www.longtermcarelink.net/eldercare/aging_services_senior_centers.htm,
NRCNPAA-National Resource Center on Nutrition, Physical Activity & Aging. (2005). Older Americans Act Nutrition Programs Toolkit. http://nutritionandaging.fiu.edu/OANP_Toolkit/toolkit%20update%202.7.06.pdf
Ziliak, J., and Gundersen, C. (2009, Sept). Senior Hunger in The Uniuted States: Differences Across States and Rural and Urban Areas. University of Kentucky Center for Poverty Research Special Reports. Retrieved on 10th may 2013 from: http://www.mowaa.org/document.doc?id=193
