Business Plan

Dear Am attaching parts of my business plan (name of file is review) that I want to revisit as I believe it has a lot of mistakes I would appreciate your update to the attached part also I will attach for your reference the whole draft for better understanding of the idea
The part to change
1)foreign direst investment
2)target population and sample size calculation.
3)Consumer Price Index in the Education Sector
also define the data source used in the calculation , use online sources only please , the study in Saudi Arabia Riyadh city