Draft Journal

Draft Journal

Nila DhunganaChamberlain College of Nursing

Carolyn SavoldyAdvanced English Composition

05/12/2021

Draft Journal

My current draft has had a lot of inspiration and I feel that I am on the right track. Even though the first part of the paper which is introduction and thesis statement was a bit challenging for me I finally got to understand how to work around it and right now am better. Finding points and arranging them in the right order even the opposing ones was a good part and I enjoyed it as I found it easy to do that. Paragraphing was challenging the first time I was writing since at times I did not know how to properly formulate topic sentences but right now I am better off (Greetham, 2018). My essay at first was not all that cohesive but with a few corrections I managed to make sure it is fully coherent. Conclusion was the best part for me as I managed to bring together all the points of the essay and summarize as well as give my final thought.

Introduction and thesis statement are a very important part of an essay and I am planning on developing them in the best way possible by using all the resources available in the library and in the notes for the class. Finding points requires research and I am determined to do that to make sure that my points and the opposing ones are relevant and of importance to make sure that the paper is relevant and good. Construction of paragraphs needs a close connection using connectors and other means like topic sentences (Greetham, 2018). I plan on writing and using these through practice to make sure I am good at that and be successful. Cohesive argument requires a clear and good flow of ideas and points. Therefore, I will re-arrange my points to make sure they flow coherently. Conclusion is a summary re-stating the thesis statement and a final thought. I will include this in my final draft and make sure that it is good.

Reference

Greetham, B. (2018). How to write better essays. Bloomsbury Publishing.