Filming in 3 2 1 and ACTION

Filming in 3 2 1 and ACTION

The most interesting thing about this easy is the revelation of how getting “too busy” sometimes can be dangerous and at the end may affect our daily performance at place of work or school. The true revelation of how “too busy” can be costly is interestingly revealed by the phrase “The common room was a mess, his mess mostly”. Here, the narrator gives a detailed description of the common room which was quite messy. I was especially impressed by how the narrator went about in describing the disorganization of items within the common room. He manages to bring a clear view of the mess such that the reader can envision it. Another interesting issue that arises from this essay is how the narrator manages to incorporate humor throughout the text. For example, in his second sentence within this passage, it appears as if the filled gallon of water was communicating with him. Its presence guarantees that he would not lack water despite that the other gallon contained little water. The narrator also makes the description easier for his readers by using comparisons. For example, he compares the bean bag chair to a lode stone which carries things several items library books and a backpack lay on the bean bad chair. Humor is revealed, to be honest, throughout the essay. I mean the entire essay is humorous. From the way the narrator wakes-up, does the homework and fall asleep while at school. However, I experienced difficulties towards the end of this passage as the writer cuts short the second last sentence. This leaves the reader hanging while the next sentences do not have any connection with the unfinished one. I would suggest that the writer should have adopted a better way of ending this passage without diverting far away from his description.

The couple

This is probably my best essay among the five. Wow! I like the way Hanna’s husband deals with the emotional situation that Hanna is undergoing. Under normal situations the husband could have reacted angrily and even left her on the cafeteria. But he understands that it is not about him or the waitress but the child that Hanna needs badly. However, she understands that the husband is also interested in getting a child just as much as she is. She appreciates how supportive the husband has been through the entire difficult situation. At the end, she comes down and even apologies to him and even starts a “romantic play”. Another interesting factor that reveals itself in the essay is the element of tolerance and patience. If the husband had not been supportive and understanding, then situation could have moved from bad to worse.

I spotted some difficulties in the third passage within the essay, “The Couple”. The writer has used short sentences which do not communicate effectively his perspective. For example, the sentence, “So stubbornly”, does not communicate anything on its own. It would have been more appropriate to join these short sentences in to one continuous sentence. This would have brought out a clearer meaning of the intended view. I would suggest that the writer should use such short sentences when writing dialogues rather than during his narration