Personal Statement For Admission To Oxford University, University Of Cambridge, University of Scheffield

I am applying 5 universities in the UK and I want a personal statement for admission to Oxford University, University of Cambridge< University of Scheffield, University of Birmingham, and Edinburg University. I am planning to study  Master of Business Administration Degree.

Its description as required by university application

It should not exceed 500 words and must include the following:

What are your short and long term career objectives?

What skills/characteristics do you already have that will help you to achieve them?

What do you hope to gain from the degree programme and how do you feel it will help you achieve the career objectives you have?

What impact this degree would have on your professional life/workplace/job?

Kindly edit my personal statement in a way that my professional experience looks amazing and outstanding, my work experience should outweigh my bachelors education as I only received distinction  grades on my bachelors degree.

My personal statement should have very less information about my bachelors degree and quite a lot regarding my professional work experience.

Thank you.