Dissertation outline based on the example ( less than 185 words) and the remaining 115 words  can be used to add more words to my essay 

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This is what my supervisor said 

 

 

 

Thank you for sending me your draft. I have made some comments on the attached document.

 

This document that you’ve produced reads more like an introduction to the dissertation rather than a skeleton outline.

 

I’ve attached an example skeleton outline from one of my previous students to show you the type of detail to include on it. I think this might be useful for you to use to draft out what topics you might want to cover in your dissertation.

 

How do you feel about having a go at producing something similar for your title?