Please add some information on my dissertation 

Results section 

Compared to studies in white skin, there is not much evidence in the literature with regards to ageing in skin of colour. There are only few studies to look at. (critically appraise) look at only two papers only. (1000 words)

Looking at few studies are they any good? What are they missing? critically review one or two papers for each ethnic skin type and review the basic information. (1000 words)

Ethnic skin should be latino, afro-Caribbean, south Asian and east Asian 

 

Look at aesthetic treatments pick one or two papers, reviewing aesthetic treatments in ethnic skin. People don’t publish much in this area why? Are they effective? why focusing much on skin lightening products? because is becoming more these days among blacks …….etc

Why discussing botox, lasers, only and not fillers? Not much published in this area? Could it be not an issue for people with skin of colour (1000 words)

Please include photographic images (of different ethnicity) and say fig 1, etc at the description, please include east asia description and pictures 

 

3.8: Discussion section

Your own thoughts, what you think is missing in the literature and what would you do perhaps differently as a study?

 

600 words

 

What do you think the risk are of using lasers, botox and skin lightening products on ethnic skin. 

600 words 

 

Total words = 4200 words

 

Please very very important reference at the end of every sentence unless is an interpretation. There should be a lot of interpretation  under the critical analysis section own views

Reference vancouver throughout please dont add so many references to the ones already there just few