Provide definitions of each of the aesthetic treatment eg lasers, botox, add fillers etc + add chemical peels all in the introduction

2 line definition of each aesthetic treatment in the introduction with pictures

Please do not change the introduction much, only add dermal fillers and chemical peels in the introduction. Dermal fillers should come after botulinum toxin, avoid term botox

Plus pictures of all aesthetic treatments , dermabrasion has a picture already

Whatever treatment you are going to cover in your ethnic groups, we need definitions of what they are in the introduction so that it doesn’t become like an introduction in the results section.

 

Pigmentation is a bigger concern for black skin and Asian skin, is about the wrinkles

Don’t know much information you may find on for eg botox and fillers on each skin type (black, Asian and Hispanic) but this is where you can bring your own personal view on it whether improvements could be made to those skin types clinically

In the discussion section + How would address these in your own practice? Why you maybe justified in using other treatment in other skin types (eg black skin microdermabrasion a universal treatment, and minimally invasive works well in black skin), lasers may not work well in black skin. All in the discussion section

Do you perceive any concerns about any of the treatment? Discussion section

Chemical peels the temptation is that someone may do it themselves, no aesthetic treatment is cheap but as more people get to know them more, is there a tendency for people to take things in their own hands like with botox. How regulated does this needs to be in the UK?

If botox and fillers are not going to be useful then actually focusing on the other treatment will be useful. Chemical peels, superficial, medium and deep chemical peels. 

Please reference every single sentence this is very important, unless it is an opinion all vancouver 

Introduction : 150 words

Results: 850 words

Discussion : 2000 words

Conclusion : 1800 words (summarise) 

 

Total =4800 words excluding references